When Id Realised Youd Gone
I shall see the sun rise againset, in an awkward fashionagain. I shallspy the world turn lonely& the skies abandon those echoes,of you- again, I shall,live.I will drive my inner self on...
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Goodbyes do come in all shapes and sizes. The final line sums it up beautifully.One suggestion, if I may?The commas...after the first 'I' and after 'You' in the fourth stanza...they just don't seem to...
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Hi, thanks for your comment,this a rush of utterence, I truly appreciate your thoughts, and when reading at a slower*pace* I agree,thanks for suggestions & your comments,Sammie Poets Passing Place
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Thanks...without those two minor snags, it's an easier read entirely, and I was able to pick up on a couple of the double entendres I missed first time through.This really is a nicely stated piece,...
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Sammie, I love this radiant poetic gem. I always love your beautiful whispers. Love,NewellI am you and you are me, hiding behind costumes of clay in blindness. In God we are perfect. All we see, hear,...
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Sammie, It's wonderful to see you on the board once again. I always enjoy reading your wonderfully penned words. I was especially touched by the last line. I wish I had thought of that line; I might...
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Sammie...this is superb writing..Love the ending and I quoteI forgive you, its time to excuseyourselfthe wind blew me a tomorrow, without you.Wonderful.. deb
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Painfully described, very well done,Pete PeruJust one brief instant hereEven the finest stones begin to spliteven gold is tarnishedeven precious bird-plumesshrivel like a coughJust one brief instant...
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beautiful write Sammie, you've expressed your heart well.. I enjoyed this greatly. ~Mystic~"Hey dad look at me, think back and talk to me. Did I grow up according to plan? Do you think I'm wasting my...
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Sammiethis whole piece is greatbut I must saythat opening stanza is the bestpart of this piecereally nicethanks for the shareERikCheck out my new book The World As I Would Paint It...Click...
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thank you ALL, so very much on your thoughts and comments Sammie Poets Passing Place
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You held me internallyfor the highest of times,& I didnt let go to face the sphereturning lies in his spitthat breathed an ugly me.This is simply breathtaking. Cass aka evening blue
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samantha ~ one of the most difficult lesson i've learned is that the woman i love has come to this conclusion, this reality. a very good write, though a little painful to read. Peace, joeSeeking the...
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